jueves, 25 de mayo de 2017

SEVENTH WRITING


FEMALE RIGHTS 
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It’s known that female position in society has changed since the beginning of times to nowadays. We’re going to analyse this change around the last 75 years.
At that time a woman was completely dependant on her parents. It was common that the oldest girl helped her mother to look after her brothers or sisters and to do the housework. As soon as the girl was 18 she got married and became dependant on her husband, she spent the day in the house with their children. She couldn’t do anything which her husband didn’t like or took any decision without talking with him. What it is more, this woman didn’t think on her own, she was just a doll controlled first by her father and then by her husband.

Nowadays female rights have considerately changed, women have changed from the inferior position to the woman who control her own life. Even though female rights have increased heavily in the last decades, men and woman don’t have still the same rights but we are near to get the equality.

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  1. Be careful with:

    -don't still have
    -the structure should be a bit clearer

    Grade: 8,25

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