sábado, 15 de octubre de 2016

SECOND WRITING

DIVORCE

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As you can see in your faily or in the people who are around you, marriage is not a fairy tail. Nowadays many people get divorced.
There are some reasons why the people get divorce. Some years ago, when people were couples they couldn't live together before got married. Because of this, they probably get divorced. It isn't easy to live with your partner and there are people who haven't tried this experience before marriage. Another reason could be work. If you have a job or just you are studying, you have to spend a lot of time in this, and you can't be with your partner as much as you want.
Moreover, many people who get divorced have children. My aunt and her husband got divorced when their daughter was 5 years old. At first  it was difficult for my cousin, she had to be in a different house every week. Some years her father had a girlfriend and a son with her. I was 3 when they got divorced so I don't remember him, because he didn't come on birthdays or familiar meetings. Futhermore my great uncle got divorced before I was born. At this moment he had a son and a daughter. (His daugher is my aunt who ot divorced) My great uncle's divorce wasn't easy, he argued with his son and since the divorce they haven't talked or spent time together. But not all in a divorce is unhappy. My great uncle got married again and they have a daughter, now she is 28 years old.
In conclusion, a marriage isn't easy. If you get married someday you could want the divorce or not. You could be with this person all your life, like most people in my family. That depends on the person. But don't worry, if you get divorce you could meet a new girlfriend or a boyfriend. That depends on you.

1 comentario:

  1. When you write the body, give each idea a different paragraph. Don't mix ideas in the same paragraph as you did in the 1st one. Example:
    1. living together before marriage
    2. work
    3. children
    etc.

    If you talk about many people, name them so that it's easier to follow the reading.

    Be careful with:

    "faily" = "family" (l.1)
    "get divorce" = "get divorced" (l.3)
    "some years" = "some years LATER" (l.10)
    "ot divorced" = "got divorced" (l.13)

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