lunes, 7 de noviembre de 2016

THIRD WRITING

"TRUE" STORY

Last weekend I was with my family in the car. We were going to visit my uncle and aunt who live in Valladolid. Suddendly our car crushed with a skunk which was walking in the middle of the highway. The car stoppe, there weren't any shop or house arround us. So we decided to phone a towl-vehicle, but there was no service. We started walking. Hours later we arrived to a lake and there we founded an old house, there weren't anyone inside it so we assumed this was an abandom house. Then we openned the house's door and came inside, we saw a sofa and a bed son we rested there for some hours. We were sleeping when a woman entered and said to us that we were in her house. She was a nice woman, she invited us for a meal and took us to the nearest mechanic. He was fixing our car all day and when he finished we said goodbye to the woman who helped us. At last we went to our uncle's and aunt's house. They couln't believe what had happend in our trip.

1 comentario:

  1. Be careful with:

    -"stoppe " = "stopped " (l. 3)
    -"there weren't any shop" = "shops" (l.3)
    -"arround " = "around" (l.3)
    -"there weren't anyone" = "there wasn't anyone" (l.5)
    -"abandom" = "abandoned " (l.6)
    -"openned " = "opened" (l.7)
    -"couln't" = "couldn't" (l.11)

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